Give me another kiss
Give me another line.
I need you.
My addiction
My vice.
The smoke curls in my mouth.
Tasting like your tongue
A fun puff
Mixed with tonsil hockey.
This feels so right
Yet so wrong.
Your hands travel my body
Discovering
Awakening
Better than any drug.
Stronger than any addiction.
When i am not with you
Withdrawl hits like a hurricane
battering my heart around
like an old rag doll
I need another puff
I need another sniff
Give me another kiss
Save me
From my addiction
A contest entry
- Contest~Your Choice by Dak.
600 points, ended January 16, 2008, 26 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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Good images and although a theme that is written often this has a fresh feel to it...bravo!! nice word choice as well I thought, best of luck! ~M
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Curse you! You know I love this poem you dork.
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so serious lysa!
as always I loved it though, I love most thinks you write. You tell me I have a way with words, but your writing blows mine out of the water. Keep up the good work, so I got something to read. <3
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