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Marybeth Away






Marybeth found Memphis

on a sunny morning telling lies;

everybody lied to her

when she was shiny-eyed

singing some old Muddy song.

Marybeth made heroin her career

for six long years on the damned end of Beale,

her guitar case collecting fixes

as she sang from somewhere else,

far away with angels.

Marybeth walked away

to a business college in Odessa

and a guy who seems to love her.

She's okay with that

but sometimes her blue eyes

look away

to the needle

and that one time,

busking to an empty street -

she sang that one time,

that one goddamn time,

she sang so right

and mixed herself up inside the four bars

and one long note that came from

a place she couldn't bear.

Marybeth has scars.




 

Author notes

Not my all-time favorite cohen piece - that would be a song that I heard him do a long time ago and the title just escapes me. I found this little pearl though and thought it was pretty zen:

GOOD ADVICE FOR SOMEONE LIKE ME



behind the pain
someone is rejoicing

behind the torture
there is love

who's going to buy
this bullshit

if you don't become the ocean
you'll be seasick
every day


Leonard Cohen, 2000

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    February 6
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    There is a melody behind these words.


  • Heart Sutra
    January 30, 2008

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    This one definitely sounds like a song....especially an old blues song. I think Leonard would have enjoyed this piece.


  • Saffron gold member
    January 13, 2008
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  • DogFish silver member
    January 13, 2008
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    tormanting


  • Annalise
    January 8, 2008
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    !!!


  • Night Hope gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    "she sang so right
    and mixed herself up inside the four bars
    and one long note that came from
    a place she couldn't bear."

    Incredible penning, my Friend. Good luck in Zayra's contest, Scribe. Wanda

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