I fall into the melody that beats from
your words
as if I am lost dancing to your
voice's symphony.
I watch my love for you sometimes drown
in your aroma
as
I inhale the scent of what a dream must taste like.
My eyes blink admiration for you
and
everytime you bless my body
with your touch
I flash you the smile that I have saved all my life to use
until now.
And everytime you hold me and press pause to the world
I feel like I
must
be
dreaming...........
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This was a really sweet poem.. The flow of your words really creat a beautiful piece.. Well done..
Peace to you,
Jetleena
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I like this. It has a 'flowy' feel (sort of up and down hill-ish...lol). It was smooth and feels full of hope and love and a lot of real nice nice. It's not too warm and fuzzy for my taste, and it has a nice tasty sound in my brain. Great job on this piece.
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Thank you
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Hold it a sec....
...ok! sorry I had to pause before i said, THIS IS GREAT! YOU GO GIRL! NICE ROMANTIC STUFF HERE!
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Thank you Swan, always appreciated
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if you're dreaming then i hope you continue to dream. An excellent expression of your feelings in this great write. I wish you and your love the best. Keep up the great work!
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Thanks hun, and thank you for always being true to reading my work, I look forward to it
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Its not a dream baby, this is real. : I love you so much, great job with this one. I love it.
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This is very nice. To find this feeling is so great. I waited a long time to find my true love. I hope you have found yours too! Love and kisses, The Shaker
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oh yes, it was hard to find, but has been found and I am happy you have found yours as well, you look very happy in your picture thank you as always for reading my work...
Love Layne
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Oh, honey...this gave me goose bumps. *sigh* whoever 'he' is, he's a very lucky man to have you, that's all I can say. Great heart's labor dear.
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Thank you so much for your sweet comments, thank you for reading hun, I appreciate it so much!!!!
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