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[ Last night I walked amongst your corpses]

Last night I walked amongst
          your corpses -
a sad monument to your country's
          ideals,
littering the ground like a million
          slaughtered cows.

Your women were raped, made to
          feel ashamed,
your children starved, shot, or
          burned to death.
You ran, but what more could
          you do?

The United Nations, activists,
          your government
all failed you,
          failed
to end the killings.

Author notes

Written about a dream I had in which I was walking through Darfur, Sudan.

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  • toolenduso
    January 17

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    So sadly true. Nice to see someone who cares about it, and to be honest I've never seen anybody put it into poetry before.


  • cece
    January 11
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    wow

  • Lone-Fairrie
    January 8
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    Very nice. Well done.