Nothing's changed about us
So I guess it doesn't really matter
This life can be so sad
And bleed just like an open wound
By drawing lines in the dirt between us
As we keep divided by the boundaries
Every move we made was scrutinised
Every betrayal was etched and burned
Until all I have left to show you
Is the only coin to throw
It's a sweet, sweet surrender
And it's all I have left to show
You may question all my motives
I have nothing more to hide
I have lied before to save face
My reputation is as it stands
For the truth can be a sharp blade
That can cut and make us bleed
Is that what you truly want now
If I bleed before your feet
All I have left now to show you
Is the only coin to throw
It's a sweet, sweet surrender
And it's all I have left to show
And though the truth is often painful
I have nowhere else to go
This life can be oh so sad
Like sweet surrender
it's all I have left to show...
A contest entry
- Sarah McLachlan~Contest~ by Angel With No Halo.
1700 points, ended February 2, 2008, 17 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ♥♥♥♥Lovesick or Sick of Love?♥♥♥♥ by Sorath.
600 points, ended April 21, 2008, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I'm so
Comments
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Much better backgroud!
You are very welcome for the trophy. You deserved it.
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wow. This is just beautiful. So ful of raw emotion and almost feels vengeful. Great work. Thank you for your entry!
P.S.
(I think the blue is a bit much for the background though.. it makes my eyes water a lot..) lol.
Thanks again,
~Krys~
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