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A Palm Of Pearls

Through grayness
of smoked filled skies
I am drawn to elevate
my vaporous eyes
and exhale
purple pearls of the sea

with nimbus thoughts
she is,
            divinity

long flowing hair
carved with sumptuous shoots
ebbed deliciously
with hips stroked
by slanderous thighs

she is a shadow
defused in the  ~mist~
rising from cleaves
of life’s palm 

with a
blank stare
I am
delirious- 
idled inside



and as she walks naked
through my thoughts
I am consumed by fragrant
streams of salt air
and limped breath

she is flawless-

to my, 
earthen awe.



Author notes

This writing is Picture inspired

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  • misticmoonlite gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    again Mall you did the theme of a lady and her swnsualality in visions of the sea, good poem , that complimentes the picture, good luck..MM


    • Malabu
      January 7, 2008
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      thanks doll...im just a sentimental old man...
      haha


  • Sedasia
    January 7, 2008

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    Mally

    This is an escape unto itself. The image does your poem no justice. This is powerfully descriptive. You have a way with words. You deliver beautifully sensuous poems, regardless of the context.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 7, 2008

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    You made a strange picture, beautiful. Thank you for your entry and good luck in my contest.
    Soulful Woman