One day in a grocery store,
Peanut Butter met Jelly.
They were both put in a cart,
By a little boy rubbing his belly.
He said "I love PB and J!"
And he went to the counter to buy.
That's when Peanut Butter and Jelly,
First looked into each other's eyes.
Jelly batted her lashes,
and gave a flirty smile.
Peanut Butter's heart melted,
As they were carried down the grocery isle.
"I have never seen a Jelly,
As beautiful as you!"
Peanut Butter sighed with love,
And Jelly lovingly sighed too.
Then, inside the shopping bag,
The two of them made a vow.
They promised to be eaten together,
No matter who ate them, or how.
They signed their names on the bag,
Inside a little heart.
It said PB and J forever,
Never to be seen apart.
They lived happilly ever after,
(Until they were eaten, of course.)
But even in someone's stomach,
They will NEVER EVER get a divorce.
In a list
A contest entry
- Peanut Butter Poems~~~ for kids up to and including age 13 by PinkPony.
550 points, ended January 20, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - For the younger set: 12 and under only. by islekine.
600 points, ended May 8, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - KIDS VS. ADULTS by longlife by longlife.
425 points, ended June 26, 2008, 14 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Poetry Contest--For Children Up To Age 12 by kiwikrazi37.
450 points, ended August 25, 2008, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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...PB&J bores me...to cliche...
>_<
I don't mean to sound offensive, please don't take it to heart.
-->pia♫♪
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for your age i seem to be a bit disappointed not saying this is a terrible poem though i dont feel touched or finding it deep in not very many ways
the poem in my opinion seems a bit childish for your age an a bit over rated
how you got these trophies?i will never know. -
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Wow. You're evil..
But I get what you mean.
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Wow! Your..nice....
Ever heard of having fun?
How can people be so boring? i will never know. -
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yes i seem like a 12 year old grouch or bully though i speak my mind i see you disagree however you wont much change my opinion.
well its an opinion and you cant judge me for that
though my opinion does seem a bit too rude because we are all at different levels of writing and reading aswell as true understanding of time space an the utter life we hold. -
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The contest specifically said "deep"...It's cute, but...the age does say you're 12.
I kinda expected as much for an 8-year old. But see? People expect us to write kiddy poems.
Poems are much different than stories.
Poems come from the heart.
Anyway, I understand if you were just bored, and no doubt this was prompted by that Peanut Butter Contest. So yeah.
-->pia♫♪
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Wow, this is great! I couldn't help but smile the whole way through
What an adorable love poem. Lol. I'm glad PB and J lived happily ever after!
Great write! Good luck in the contest. -
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thanks!
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fantastic rhyme flow. I love it! PB and J's are good too
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LOL!I thought about entering in this contest but....I don't stand a chance!LOL!
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Thank you for your fun entry in our contest, we felt your meter was out in places and although it originally made the finalist list we find we have had to demote it because of this.
Please join us in future contest...Sue and Jeff
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WOW - this is delightful! I'm very impressed - your rhyme was excellent and this whole piece was very well done!
Congrats. on all your trophies, too!! Well-deserved!
best wishes
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This is really great!
You've done a wonderful job on this!
Thank you so much for entering!
Write on.
*PEACE*
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Welcome to AllPoetry
What a wonderful write
I have never tried peanut butter and jelly but this write makes me want too.
.♥.
Enjoy AllPoetry
Stay safe
~Manda
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One of the CUTEST and most DARLING poems I've ever read!
A masterpiece poem featuring peanut butter and jelly, our two star players!
Every line and all dialog is delightful and I congratulate you for penning something so profoundly splendid. 
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