you see how the epidermal of
a road is varnished
ensuring its magnetism all the time
especially when it is fatiguing
and memorializing all those nomads
who took a ramble over it
jubilating while dreaming those voyagers
which are yet to attain for its roam...
A contest entry
- Make me Feel, See and Smell what she is by Manda Kathryn.
600 points, ended January 9, 2008, 7 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Eye opening
I dont think I will ever look at a road in quite the same way ever again hehe. Imagery that carries you to place quite "usually" bland but now becomes worthy of so much more. lol excellent stuff!
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Amazing write. Strong visual and passionate walk
Different and unique
Thank you very much for your entry
Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
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much praise!
wow. amazing, i see the picture of a road, or person, or culture, or even the name of Jesus Christ being used in this. so many roads abandoned, so many people disowned, so many cultures forgotten, so many humans leaving Jesus out of there lives or just trying to trample His name of out existance.
well written!
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What a profound and well written piece of poetry. I love the imagery throughout this write. Very well crafted. I wish you the best in the contest.
Sam
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