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Co-ordination

Eyes have what it is the mouth will yearn

Ears have what it is the mouth will learn

Nonetheless, the mouth speaks out of turn.

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  • Naridill
    January 13, 2008
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    Beautifully said. Simple and stunning with amazing imagery.

  • Amarige
    January 12, 2008
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    Wonderful entry..Tony mouthful piece..Amazing work
    Amarige


  • ellipsist
    January 12, 2008

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    simply stated, thought provoking... love the arrangement of this piece and the way in which it's phrased!


  • faithwhisperer silver member
    January 11, 2008

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    Deep

    This is very deep, but I'm not as intelligent as you, because I have to keep thinking through it in my mind. It sounds really amazing though! Congrats on contest!


  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 9, 2008

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    I like this one, it's different and I really think it's true... I love the way the last words rhyme as well and adore les font!


  • creationsfromheart
    January 8, 2008
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    cleaver write and some good offered reminders of keeping ones mouth shut.


  • Jalalbad gold member
    January 7, 2008
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    clever sir titus. A winner for sure, a quote that will go down in history.

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