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Reflection

I see you in the mirror
Another habit
I should quit
reflected in the glass

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  • xxRainbowDawnxx
    January 14, 2008

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    For such a short piece this packs a punch. The way you are telling us that you should quit looking at things that are reflected, almost seems metaphorical in many ways to mean such things as I shouldn't look at things too deeply, I shouldn't analyze myself or even not to look at something you can't have. Very reflective, no pun intended.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    January 7, 2008
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    This is sincerely profound and expressive... x