I am face down
involuntary
incapable
there is gravel sticking to my eyes
and dust settling in my lungs
This laughable road of attempted solace
stretches over older and similarly pointless roads
These pebbles are made of bones
plucked
chopped
rounded
and scattered
across the forgotten footprints of those
they once structured
My hand is flat against the stones that formed
cheekbones
knees
and spines
long before Babel
electricity
and AIDS
There will not be many of my footprints to conceal
only a few weeks worth of walking
some make it years, others decades
but we all dry out in time
we all for various and
ultimately redundant reasons
stop walking
Whether we are on our
sides
bellies
or backs
curled
or outstretched
In the end we are all
broken
nameless
countless
A myriad of predictability
while we come to realize just how
hostile and sticky the scattered skeletons
we traveled on have been this entire time
And that we and our skeletons
just like every other person passed
have been
stuck
kept
helpless
foolish
naïve
and trapped
from day one
Amongst the paths and ruins of those
we quite proudly decided to ignore and deem
ridiculous
Mocking the obviously foolish routes they took
while our feet were already moving
along the same disguised path
leading to the same disguised nowhere
that once sent us into fits of smug giggling
I am wheezing and cold against these bones
like a reluctant lover
And soon, against my ear, I hear the beat
deep in the earth
The rhythm that thousands of ears have listened to
over every century passed
Footsteps traveling proudly
ignorantly strutting across their future condition
And I am thinking just what they themselves will wonder
with twitching fingers
the sun nipping the skin from their bodies
baiting the moisture from their skulls
pressed pathetically against the same damned road
Their children and their children’s children
will waste away on
We never learn, do we?
A contest entry
- Same Mistake by Barely Breathing.
700 points, ended May 18, 2008, 10 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Comments
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this is a good poem, i love the imagery that you created here,
such mind provoking poems,
all my love,
best of luck in the contest,
kitty xxx -
This is such a great write and filled with such brilliant imagery. I really enjoyed reading through this, it gave me a lot to think about. Thank you for entering my contest and all the best.


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Wow, I am gonna go jump off a bridge now. I love the honest and matter-of-fact tone here. I love the lack of over emotion. I love the stone coldness that i get from this thanks!


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Haha thanks very much. And may I suggest not jumping of a bridge. Never a good idea unless everyone else is doing the same thing
Thanks for reading.
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