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K.F.C

 

 

He was the K.F.C of years gone bye

Finger licking good bird that couldn't fly

 

All that is left is this twisted mirage

Something real tasty but we went to far 

 

I don't no where the dodo's have all gone

All I can say is they didn't last that long

 

The fat of the land but dodo's never fly-ed

Soon we would catch them and eat them with pie...

 

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  • CherryOnTop
    January 13, 2008
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    Congrats on your HM!!! I love this about the DODO's


    • Timespell
      January 13, 2008
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      Thanks...

      Those poor old DODO's never stood a chance...LOL

      ~T.S~


  • just mercedes gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    Thank you for your entry, and your great response to the prompt. This made me laugh, and that is always good. I like particularly /finger licking good bird that couldn't fly/ and the way you carried that image on through to the final line. Great work!


    • Timespell
      January 12, 2008
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      Thanks for reading and commenting, and thanks for the HM award.

      All the best,

      ~T.S~