Birthday: Party hat and streamers

Birthdays are a special time
A day that’s just for you

I’m sending you three wishes
I hope they all come true

So make one wish just as you wake
And one before you rise

Then save the last for birthday cake
Making sure to close your eyes

So, Happy birthday partner
I’m glad that you are here

But remember

Party hats and streamers
Are nothing, without the beer

Cheers

In a list

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A contest entry

January Birthday Contest by Partners In Crime. 550 points, ended January 21, 2008, 4 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

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Polaja
March 13, 2008

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Hood-Winked!
Beautiful tribute I really like rhythm of this poem and the flow is beautiful... lovely well wishing, the twist of humour at the end is wonderfully done

Keep writing

Polly
Wolf Mistress
January 10, 2008

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Awwwww you are so right...a birthday party needs beer

Lot's of them........
I am sure LizB knows that tooand loves it also

Loved the birthday poem,
Good luck in the contest,

XXJeannette
- -LizBTropez-
  January 15, 2008
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  Actually, no, alcohol is very damaging so I don't drink.
  
  But thanks for the well wishes!
catz
January 8, 2008

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Well, Cindy, I see you finally got down to business in the last stanza

This is a super birthday poem, makes for a perfect birthday And has a nice rythm to it. Good job and good luck in the contest

Dee
Sunshine1
January 8, 2008
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very good
nice, I like it alot!!!!
it all flowed together great!!
- FifthDove
  January 9, 2008
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  Hey Ang Nice to see ya back on the site
Warrior7
January 7, 2008

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hihihi, excellent piece here i loved your ending
and as always your rhyming is superb. Thanks for entering and goodluck