Laugh and the whole world
...grows suddenly awkwardly silent, staring at you as if nothing, ever, has been that funny.
A contest entry
- Finish this your way----- #2 by daviscth.
300 points, ended January 10, 2008, 28 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Wow. That's like all I can say. WOW. Awesome. Stunning. Beautiful. Ummm. You should've gotten gold! Maybenext time, I'll be praying!
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its cute
it is talking about something that is funny its good to have those types of things in your life to keep you healthy and happy with a good attitude, good luck on the contest, keep writing -Amy
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This made me smile-you summed up a secret fear of mine here perfectly. The look on others faces that quite plainly states NUTTER! LOL.
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I find humor in everything...laugh on...........
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Thank you for taking time out to post in my contest. Your entry is appreciated. All the best of luck to you at judging, Cathy
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crystaldust 08-01-08 16:29
I definitely like this ending. It's realistic, down-to-earth and shows the voice of experience. Great. I hope you bagged a tropy.
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