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Bald Spot

  Bald spot on my head
Solar panel catching rays
  For a love machine


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This is my first haiku.

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  • albymyheart gold member
    February 1, 2008

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    Very funny! The best haiku I've ever read! I think you should continue in this discipline. Lol
    alby


  • just mercedes gold member
    January 11, 2008

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    Yes, I laughed! I love haiku, this one is way different ! What an image, the solar panel stoking the love machine! Thank you.


  • basilisk
    January 7, 2008
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    HA!

    Have you got a poem for a beer gut too?

    Good for a smile!