My angel,
I hope you can hear me, I haven't much time so please listen closely.
We have had our disagreements and we have had our fights.
Some minor, others quiet large.
There are things we left unspoken,
many many things unsaid.
But this my love you truly must know
before I am truly dead.
I loved you when I met you,
and I have loved you all my life.
Such happiness you have brought me,
in good times and in bad.
I promised I would always be there,
I promised never to leave.
I will keep this promise I made to you
until you to pass through.
Please do not mourn too long,
Please start your life anew
And if someone should come along, I will still be with you.
I will always be beside you,
I will always help you through.
I may be gone, but I am still here
My love I will always be with you.
Author notes
I think the important thing that I would want to get across is that I am dead but not gone
A contest entry
- Death... Your final words after the fact by BluesMan.
800 points, ended January 15, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I agree with the person below
Very heartfelt indeed
But I didn't enjoy the flow
I found the few lines
That were longer then the others
Made it Quite sloppy
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Very Heart felt Good luck in my contest
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