If I cut you will you bleed a sonnet;
flowing with free verse prose?
Vivid words float down a scarlet stream.
Paint a picture with blood, stealing the
hearts of the romantic; captivating the mind.
Wrapping sensual desire around the soul,
posey’s of love hiding in your words.
Hearing the silent precious song;
whispering my own daydreams to me.
Must be magic; knowing all my secrets,
fantasies that I thought were under lock and key.
Uncaged from confinement; opened by a
smooth silky deep voice melting me
raining honey kissed haikus.
Author notes
Dedicated to Michael, you have poetry flowing through your veins and you give me the inspiration for this poem, Thank you Michael
raingoddess
A contest entry
- Poetry Addicts Right Here!! by Acidanthra.
900 points, ended January 10, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 31 to 35 ages enter your best prewrite Judged by RedwingSpirit.
475 points, ended January 18, 2008, 14 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow!!
This is wonderful, U write so beautifully...Im gonna write like this one day! U have a nice rythme -
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment and stopping by to review my poem.
raingoddess
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I have to admit I think this one deserved better. I really like the flow and where it takes you. cant say any one will find my heart on my sleeve. I certainly like what you found with the pic, very creative.
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beautiful write, congrats on the HM
always lovely when someone inspires us to write something fabulous
Tasha
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Wonderfully done!
Your tribute is incredible, I love the first few lines. I can almost see print fountaining up in bright, red arterial sprays, scattering random stanzas everywhere. This is why I'm part of AP, the genuine respect of artists for other artists. Thanks for sharing with us. -
this is an amazing poem...a strong testament that he is indeed a 'poet addict...' congrats on the HM...
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awww
Beautiful!!
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Wonderful job. the imagery is amazing
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Nice write
Thank you for taking the time to enter this into my contest.
I wish you the best of luck.
RedwingSpirit
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To be honest, I got stuck on the first line due to the lack of punctuation. But, once I figured it out and became drawn in, the flow was mesmerizing and the imagery was beautiful! Great write my poet...
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This is absolutely lovely and a wonderful dedication to MyKeee
Vivid words float down a scarlet stream
Paint a picture with blood, stealing the
Hearts of the romantic, captivating the mind
Wrapping sensual desire around the soul
Posey’s of love hiding in your words
Beautiful
A pleasure to read.
~sugar~
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Interesting
I like your style. Keep up the good work. I'll be checking on you from time to time. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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Amazing!!!, Stunning!!!
WOW!!! if anyone knew how this came about. You would be called a genius. I am so grateful and really don't deserve such a great piece of poetry that I haven't seen from you like this in a while.
It flows beautifully, great similes and great imagery that sweeps us all into your song of poetry. I can go on and on but I will just say. Thank you.
BTW - I featured this poem and nominated it for front page. Yes, I really like this.
Michael ~ aka - Mykeee
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Thank you
Thank you for the wonderful comment and the inspiration for this poem.
raingoddess
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That was haunting and lovely to enjoy!
I think this is one of my very fav's by you! and that
is saying a lot! I think I will remember that poem for
weeks to come! Excellent job...I felt like we were part
of your blood/energy flow.
Excellent!
ears2hearyou
Kathleen : ))
you have a touch of dark poet in you, a powerful spirit
too!
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I don't know who Michael is, or what he has or hasn't done,
but it would be real nice of him, if he kept it up, Whatever made you write this magnificent piece, I say go Michael LoL. I want to that Michael too
" thanks Michael ".
Beautiful writing.
loveandblessings2u * yours always
: joyce :
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Dynamic & Defined
Oh girl you have just knock the socks off that old rooster...This was a most beautiful dedication to Mike. What can I say...yes he has a poetic affect on his readers...and you. "Be proud Mike, you are an inspiration." write on Rain..........Mom
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It would show some caring, I guess, the bleeding, and here it does attract attention. Blood does look nice when it flows in water. The image sticks in my mind.
Nice write actually.
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Loved this, girl.....
I could not find a favorite part, because ALL of your words were magnificant to me, but this...stood out, in my eyes as I proceeded...and I quote~
"Wrapping sensual desire around the soul
Posey’s of love hiding in your words
Hearing the silent precious song,
Whispering my own daydreams to me"
Great job, and an even more lovely dedication to Michael.
ephiphany♥
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