Sighs slip
from longing lips
as mind sets sail
upon Hope's ship
of dreams;
destination -
Love...
the promised land.
Author notes
Prompt is: DRIFT AWAY
In a list
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries/20 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended January 7, 2008, 6 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - for those who have ME on their favorites by leander.
900 points, ended January 2, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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The first thing that came into mind when seeing that picture was:
"That woman has implants"
It doesn't really have anything to do with the poem but I couldn't help mentioning it
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Oh heck! It's time for me to go to bed.
I tried.
I'll be back
Until then
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Exquisite! The overall feeling of this one just captivates you and really lets hope thrive in the heart, body and mind. Short, but damn strong. This is one of my faves of all time. Awesome job! Poetry perfection!
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Very nice
It just flows so nicely together.
destination -
Love...
the promised land.
Love it!
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Love the promised land. Oh my! Funny bunnies for you!
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sigh
what else can i say?. other then this is very beautiful. i love the feel of this piece.
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congrats!
on the well deserved gold!
this is awesome!
very well done indeed...I love this write!
worthy of the tin and much more!
Blessings! Tammy
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Beautifully done, my friend
So sensual; so smooth and just a truly gorgeous piece!
Congrats on the gold; very much deserved!
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Smooth as silk, deep as the vast ocean. Gives the reader a feeling of peace. You sure earned that trophy!!
Wolfie -
this is such a lovey and creative write and really captured my thoughts. well done and best of luck in the contest
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So lovely and creative...don't we all drift away in our minds to peace and comfort...excellent use of metaphor and meaning...
Simply beautiful!
THANK YOU FOR ENTERING! -
Interesting thought.
To sail away in one's mind.
I do that a lot.
I'm glad you''ve found your muse, as well.
-Saint
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