Running fingers, through your hair,
fragrant perfumes, fill the air,
hairs on skin, hold droplets fine,
hands move slow,taking their time.
Spray me, onto satin skin,
let the masquerade begin,
gently rubbing, in between,
up and down, with silky sheen.
Steam engulfs, our bodies melt,
through the mist, orgasms felt,
perfume cascades, round the room,
spray surrounds us, in our tomb.
Lingering fingers, probe and stroke,
smells, that only we evoke,
sliding gently, to the floor,
water trickling, down the door.
Nothing spoken, just the eyes,
cocoons of mist, our one disguise,
heavenly scent I breathe inside,
used up, body spray, cast aside.
Author notes
Well-I felt like it!!!!
A contest entry
- TEN THOUSAND POINTS OF RHYME (Now 20,000+) Part 6 Sensual by cricketjeff.
1250 points, ended January 8, 2008, 18 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Erotic Pleasures by Jonathan Wikkins.
525 points, ended June 1, 2008, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Steaming
You have a wonderful talent for painting werotic stories that all but physically torture me.
Well done with this one. Terry
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wow very nice.
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incredible write here!
this is going to be a DIFFFICULT contest to judge, with so many great entries!
thank you for entering, and good luck!
mike, aka jonathan wikkins -
Thank-you to all our prizewinners. A very good standard at the top of this contest, we are seeing many of the same names at the top of each round, it shows you are well rounded and versatile rhyming poets. Over half way now just 3 more rounds where you can enter pre-writes then the grand finale. Get your rhyming and scanning skills honed for writing us the best new rhyming poem since Methusalah was a twinkle in his mother's eye.
Thanks again for entering
Jeff and Sue
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Definitely the best poem of yours that i have read and really good to see a newcomer doing well as late as the sixth round. Keep trying! I shall be sending you a top-up of 20 points to take you to 50 for sixth place
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Well done Hilly. A bit daring for you or is it just a talent that you keep to yourself normally? Nice one and in perfect taste.
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Excellent
Well well Hilly you dark horse, this is a superb sensual write. Its flow is brilliant and it draws the reader in. wishing you all the very best in the contest Brian.
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This is nice. I love the imagery in it!!! Kepp it up
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Wow This is great dear I like it a lot it is very sensual
You don't write much ,like this do you?
Thank you for entering my contest I wish you the best of luck
RedwingSpirit
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