Upon my soul the kiss of light
embraced my enigmatic mood
The Angels sing a tender dream
seducing smiles to bend and breath
Forever was born in my heart that day
a temporary sense of life's belief
And all that we were became enchantment
dispelling lonliness and grief
My love.. my soul my life in your hands
Will ever be perpetual
Death take me and make me beautiful
a blend of lifes bright kiss
A contest entry
- Write the missing lines by XxGoldenxXDawnxX.
450 points, ended January 29, 2008, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Hummm this would be great but... "Forever was born in my heart that day" this really doesn't seem to fit. Too cliche and boring. Also, "My love.. my soul my life in your hands" theses lines just don't fit because the rest of the lanuage is so much more rich and read so powerful.
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Stunning! I thought wow when I read the title and first line before I even clicked on the poem. You appear to have sight and I love meeting people like you, it makes me realise I'm not alone in my expansive consciousness.
Peace Georgia
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"Forever was born in my heart that day"
love this!!!
great poem...very moving!!!
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