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A Kiss, And A Caress

Soft January kisses,
laced of lavender snow,
drifted drearily south,

Snug February caresses,
danced in showers song,
fading to sea


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Prompt is: DRIFT AWAY

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  • Mrs LadyEnthralling
    January 8, 2008

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    this is absolutely beautiful L i think you blew what i do out of the waters completely thanks for the clinching of my chest

    mrs enthralling


  • Tam
    January 7, 2008

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    oh my...

    how lovely this is!
    congrats on the silver jewelry!
    this is so very worthy...
    and I love the pic too...
    great job with the prompt!
    Blessings! Tammy


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    this is such a beautiful and soft write and it just flowz amazingly off the page. well done and best of luck


  • mysticstorm gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    How soft and wonderful the flow and meaning are...beautiful metaphor and a wonderful feeling of peace and comfort...excellent write for the prompt.
    Thank you for entering!