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My Soul.... Sighs

Missing image

Just taking a moment,

to stop and pause.

Reflecting upon 

the blessings of my life.

 

Thanking God for this beautiful gift,

the union of love.

His healing touch, loins that join mine;

in our rhythmic dance upon which we

feast.

 

Renewing our strength, releasing our breath,

bathing in the freedom of our bodies.

Entwined and in hunger for each other.

Fluid moments of tender relief.

 

I  bask in his scent,

breathe in his masculine strength.

In his eyes I am reflected,

in awe and at  peace, fed.

 

Sighing with pleasure my spirit sings.

"What a beautiful man you have treasured me.

Thankyou father god,

for giving me the best of blessings in him."

 

My soul exhales,

with his touch still warm upon my lips,

heart, body and spirit.

 Amen and Ahhhmen. 

 


 

Author notes

MY 100th POEM! I had no idea, I have been a busy girl!
I almost fell on the floor, I didn't realize the count.
Thankyou...that was a surprise, and what a great
prompt! our 100th poem written.


Contest prompt was the picture image.
It is good a treasure to be a woman at wonderful times like these.
I truly enjoy my husband and am so thankful he is a passionate soul.

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  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    March 9, 2008

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    " My soul exhales,
    with his touch still warm upon my lips,
    heart, body and spirit.
    Amen and Ahhhmen. "
    This write is amazing, wonderful job
    Good luck in my contest.

    This write is amazing, wonderful job,
    Loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Polaja Greeters member
    March 7, 2008

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    This is a wonderfully passionate poem the ending was brilliant I really like the picture - it is unusual to see pretty pictures like that where the lady is wearing glasses! But the poem was just as (if not more) beautiful and I'm glad I had the chance to read it congratulations on the honorable mention

    Keep writing

    Polly


  • fantasysmurf
    January 20, 2008
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    Bliss

    Every woman should experience this.


  • MahoganyFlow
    January 12, 2008

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    Wonderful depiciton on this. Not the typical and I like that. Good luck!


  • Poetic Tasha Moderators member
    January 12, 2008

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    wow hun this was amazing...
    what a lovely write and how lucky you both
    do sound to have each other!

    Best of luck in the contest!

    Bravo
    Tasha


  • Great Cthulhu
    January 10, 2008

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    Love the picture!

    You brought a bit of moisture to my eyes. I wouldn't label this as romance, more like the respect of two wonderful people that deserve the best. (ok, that's much more bulky than 'romance', I'm still rollin' with it!) The last three lines are incredibly powerful. Good luck in the contest. (you should get GOLD in my humble opinion!)


  • Nick B
    January 10, 2008
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    this is very touching and revealing, and i like the emotion behind it.


  • onesugar gold member
    January 10, 2008

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    This is a beautiful dedication for your husband
    The love you feel just flows from the page
    I loved it
    Good Luck in the contest
    ~sugar~


  • ennovy silver member
    January 9, 2008

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    Beautifully Penned

    Thankful prayers of bliss, with that someone special, you have taken a total new concept of the picture and its a beautifl write. Excellent read...loved it!....novy


  • moluv10
    January 8, 2008
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    I love this!! So romantic! Best of luck in the contest.


  • Ephiphany
    January 7, 2008

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    I LOVED THIS......
    wow, what a creation, you have penned. Great job and good luck.

    ephiphany♥

  • Loveandblessings2u gold member
    January 7, 2008
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    Amen and Amen, is right.
    I am happy that you are blesseed to have such a wonderful husband in your life. He truly is a Gift from God,
    something to be thankful for.
    You have done such a beautiful job writing this.

    loveandblessings2u & yours always
    Joyce


  • Mykeee
    January 7, 2008
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    That is a sweet dedication. Lovely thoughts ~ Mykeee


  • natchstucco
    January 7, 2008

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    quite the image used for this one. Sounds as if he is a lucky fella in more ways that 3 or 4 .llol. It is good to see that you are feeding off all the good things he is.


  • Soulful Woman silver member
    January 7, 2008

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    Bravo...How wonderful that you have found a man that is all that you need. That truly a blessing and you have expressed that here. Great job and good luck in the contest.
    Soulful Woman


  • SilverButterfly gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    Whoa! this is not a good thing for me to read, after all I am single and celebate for a very long time!

    But....if I were to think too long about.. I would say...

    this was tender..sensual and very very sweet!!

    I think it is a BEAUTIFUL thing to have the love and passion of a good HUSBAND!!

    WHOA!
    ( it is so difficult to read sensual poems being as I am, but I loved this)

    SilverButterfly


  • VirginiaDarling
    January 7, 2008

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    Very good poem. It went well with the picture prompt. Great form, excellant wording. Keep up the good work.


  • raingoddess gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    Beautiful

    This is so beautiful, moments of reflection, tender mon=ments of love, you have done a great job here, I see now that thisis going to be a very hard contest to judge, excellent write, thank you for entering my contest and good luck.

    raingoddess

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