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So Sorry - From Me

Sorry you heard that
So, sorry you see
Sorry if you believe that
This sorry is free

I'm sorry you wonder
What's gotten into me
This sorry's for you
So sorry - from me

I'm sorry for acting
Like it's all about me
I'm sorry for reacting
Like a dick when you leave

But sorry doesn't cut it
Does it? You see?
Sorry is bullshit
Sorry is cheap

Sorry is just a word
That we use when we mean
It sucks to be you
So sorry - from me

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  • Lonely Christina
    July 26, 2008

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    "But sorry doesn't cut it
    Does it? You see?
    Sorry is bullshit
    Sorry is cheap" these lines remind me of what i have said to my x bf. i love this poem! i can feel your emotion while reading it,
    good job
    xoxo- christina


  • PrInCeSsOfRoCk gold member
    February 3, 2008

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    so true...sometimes sorry is just a reflex but we dont actualli mean it really. simple but powerful.

    bravo


  • kiwigirljacks gold member
    February 2, 2008

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    I'm really liking this!!!! Makes me wonder about what I really mean when I actually say 'sorry' to someone!

    Hmmm it's a thinker! Good job!


  • Fedrizzi
    January 9, 2008

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    I like the last stanza the most out of the whole poem, like nico-love did, this poem is simply beautiful, wonderful piece


  • brittany.geeze
    January 9, 2008

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    Sorry is just a word
    That we use when we mean
    It sucks to be you
    So sorry - from me

    i love it
    absolutely fantastic
    it's simple.
    you didn't try to play it up.
    you left it as is, and it's fantastic as is.

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