I forget how it feels,
To be deserving of this world.
When the people around me,
Think its a game to kick me around.
I tryed to be everything,
Just for you to notice me.
But trying was to hard,
Ecspecially since you could not see.
There is something in this world,
That I cannot seem to find.
Maybe its better left unfound,
Like a memory from my mind.
My twisted perseption,
It gets me nowhere I want to go.
A demented reality,
I am just a manaquin out for show.
You put me down, and step on my dreams
Kill me with every word you say.
Still there is nothing that will keep me down,
I am just waiting for the day.
Last minute poem, what do you think?
Comments
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oohh whats goona happen next.... we'll never know. it was good though.
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i like the ending of it. it kinda leaves you wondering what is gonna happen. very well done
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Brutal
I love the brutal emotion in this poem. The perserverance and determination is very evident. Well done.



