fingertips aching to touch
lips longing to meet
merely a whisper away
so near, yet so far
in soft flutters of hesitation
my breath caught in a sigh
warm and intoxicating
your scent surrounds me
drawing me closer to you
the need to feel you near me
feeding on desire's heat
as my hunger grows
to watch your hands glide over me
trailing fire where they touch
silken caresses, feather light
exploring peaks and valleys
makes me want you more than ever...
to hold you deep inside
liquid fusions flow together
heated bodies melt as one
as passion washes doubts away
moans growing from within
find their voice and echo
in a song of honeyed tones
this slow dance of provocation
softly teasing my response
as I smile and move to meet you
giving all I have to give
let me stay like this forever
wrapped within your warm embrace
Author notes
In dreams and in love there are no impossibilities...
This quote is a prompt.
Please write a poem inspired by this quote.
I'm so sorry, I got carried away and went to 30 lines...but it's not that much past 20.
A contest entry
- In dreams and in love.... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
425 points, ended January 13, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I can see why you earned the Gold with this piece. You really did a great job with it. It flows flawlessly with passion and outstanding imagery
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Thank you for your lovely comment, Ed. I appreciate it very much and am always happy to receive words of praise from you.
Margaret
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this slow dance of provocation
softly teasing my response
as I smile and move to meet you
giving all I have to give
let me stay like this forever
wrapped within your warm embrace
A melody of the love and the melody of the beauty of life is witnessed in the words here...well done...
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Thank you very much for your lovely comment and also for awarding me the Gold trophy in your contest. I always find your prompts both interesting and challenging to work with.
Margaret
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slow dance of provacation...
Wow... beautifully penned. Soft silky, sultry and sensual! Does it for me! Good luck in the contest!
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you are good at these, you wax lyrical on erotic , ,good for a trophy as usual hugs xxpp
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God damn Mum, now I am aching for someones touch
Your sensual writing here left me breathless.....
I know I can write sensual but to me your the DANG IT queen of sensual
This is a masterpiece, you did the prompt justice and more ................
I hope ya win a trophy cause it deserves one
As always I look up to you, admire your writing and respect your friendship
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Thank you so much Baby Girl
I'm not so sure about being the Queen of Sensual...you're pretty amazing in that department
When I read your comment I was feeling a little down and it cheered me up, so thank you again for that. I enjoy the friendship we share and so look forward to our talks.
Love
Mum 
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I am glad I cheered you up....and ditto
Smile Mum, keep smiling
Cin
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wow auntie this is an amazing and sensaul write which hold emotions in it aswell. i love the whole feel to this write. well done and best of luck
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Thank you sweetheart. You always say the most wonderful things about my poems. Sometimes the words are hard to find and at other times they flow easily...this was one of those times.
Love always
Auntie
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