What is beauty?
Being thin
Having expensive clothes
Being a model
Is ugly being fat then?
Beauty is only skin-deep or can there be beauty within?
Are people less fortunate than you uglier than you?
Are popular people necessarily prettier?
Is everyone in the media spotlight 'pretty'?
Beauty is unfathomable,
There is no real meaning
Beauty is the mind's opinion
And there will always be someone who thinks that YOU are beautiful
So hold on everyone out there in the world
A contest entry
- Ages 14 and under: I AM DEEP BECAUSE . . . " by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended February 20, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - More than just a pretty face... by aligurl.
625 points, ended February 25, 2008, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What is your opinion of beauty?
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oh I really liked how you put the questions into this poem. A very mature look on what beauty really is. If only the world felt the same way. Thank you for entering and good luck in my contest.
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thanks for entering.
Good luck.
Brian -
Nice. Favorite:
Beauty is unfathomable,
There is no real meaning
Beauty is the mind's opinion
And there will always be someone who thinks that YOU are beautiful
The last line grates on me, though. Try to say it in five different ways, and see which alernative you like best.
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good message
it just doesn't flow out that well
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i know. i didnt spend very long on it.
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