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Poetic Advice

Don`t carry on, life goes far too quick
Get out of bed, you only think you are sick
Laying around letting time slowly pass
Don`t be fucking lazy, Get off your fat arse
Use the brain and ability that God gave to you
Not everyone can write poetry, only a select few
Get out a pen and paper, once the first seed is sown
You may write something brilliant, a really good poem
How can somebody so talented, send me into shock?
By telling me some bullshit, about writers block
I don`t want any excuses, don`t tell me you can`t
Just wake up to yourself, use your God given talent
You talk about love, freeverse or even rhyme
Write me a poem please, stop wasting time
I`m sorry if I`m pushy, I won`t do things by halves
Don`t be scared of some humour, we all need the laughs
I wrote this poem, it was you, who gave me the inclination
Please accept it in good faith, It is to give you inspiration
So lady, forget about feeling sorry and sad
Write some poetry, it`ll make you feel glad




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  • Truetome
    February 15
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    my my! are not you the one to tell ... hee hee. L,


  • Meej
    February 2

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    hahaha I loved it and indeed it did make me laugh....fantastic write and I particularly loved the bit you wrote about only thinking you're sick...haha..that's so me sometimes..thanks for putting a smile on my dial!!

    Meej


    • goat1826
      February 2
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      If it put a smile on your dial
      then I`m happy
      Glad you approve


  • Swan song gold member
    March 21, 2008
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    Well done loved it! Thank you for entering


  • girl shaman
    January 14, 2008

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    um well i said no rhyme.
    obviously you didnt read what i wrote so im sorry but im going to have to remove it :/


  • poet2angels gold member
    January 7, 2008
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    Thanks for your entry, your opinion and advice.
    Have a nice day...
    Lynda

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