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Mirror of Reality

mirror
now gives blessing,

but later
realities echo curse,

as reflections
of nothingness

replicate
passage of
worn displays

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  • FlipperSwitch
    January 16, 2008
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    Very nice, simple. Thank you for entering.


  • Amera gold member
    January 12, 2008

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    The mirror only displays the surface of beauty and the inner beauty developes and matures from within. I don't think the reflection becomes worn, I think it displays grece in beauty.

    Love,
    Amera♥

  • Amera gold member
    January 12, 2008
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    The mirror only displays the surface of beauty and the inner beauty developes and matures from within. I don't think the reflection becomes worn, I think it displays grece in beauty.

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • Lady Ireland gold member
    January 9, 2008
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    Very intelectual Fran!
    As ever the man of words.
    Great job.
    Dolores x