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I Am No Masterpiece at all (summary in one minute)

The pitch in less than a minute.1

Theres a man who makes living dolls, he has been trying to teack his son but hes never gotten the hang of it. While it father was out he tried to impress him by making the most beautiful living doll ever, except shes not.2

Shes average. No one would ever buy an average doll, so his dad, who is quite disappointed. Tells him to kill her. Well not KILL kill her, but to dismantle her. 3

As he looks into her soft blue eyes, be realizes, he can't. Theres something inside of him begging to let her stay alive.4

At first it starts out bumpy. Shes almost human like, too much to be exact.5

But slowly, he realizes he loves her, the only problem is. The new leader doesn't like imperfectios in his country. He urges his dad to take care of things. 6

Does he?

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