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Laying down beside me 

I look at her, her long ebony hair

body beautiful.  

Softly dip my fingers

in her honey

spread sweetly

s-l-o-w-ly 

across my lips;

I just,

close my eyes, savor
such heavenly secretions.

 

Moans  -to me- angelic song

revel in pleasure
wipe each others tears.
My rough hands touch,

silky skin.
Caresses whisper soft, slow,

as I linger just above that place,
my passion longs to know.
Trembling fingers reach for love,

feel the heat we can't subside.
Single digit sneaks inside,
seeking, searching

more passion begins.

Back, forth, forth back

the motions go.
I do it slow to see what goes.
Breath's hot, now gasps,

toes curled and fingers grasp.
Mouth latched to heaving breast,

emotions, forward, love confessed.

Staff of love big hard now in place...

Slowly takes over launched upon

a secret sea

heavens gift of ecstasy;

her eyes close
as she shudders with pleasure,

sheer strength felt between her legs.
Motions, whispers, heat,

fills her cup with deep desire.
Pull her near,

muscled arms wrapped around

her back in strong embrace.
Pace slow now begins to quicken
as I lovingly gaze upon her face.

Furrowed brows
puckered lips.
we start to move

in unison. 
Lovely hips

each thrust is met
my hardened rod

hot desperate. 

  

Burrowed

within ourselves
and calling out to God;

tingle starts to boil deep.

sweat appears, fluids seep.
All muscles now lose control;

love is joined...
...within our soul.

 

I made her mine,

She made me hers,

and it started with only

one look. 

 

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  • imahealer
    February 6, 2008
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    T, This is an exquisite and sometimes graphic description of what we all dream of finding. My favorite line is "Slowly takes over, launched upon a secret sea, heaven's gift of ecstasy." Great use of alliteration and internal rhyme. Beautiful as only you can do.
    Much love, Shana


  • Timespell
    January 13, 2008

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    Very Nice...
    You have described a very intimate moment between two lovers. Good luck in the contest.

    All the best,

    ~T.S~

  • Liquid memories
    January 9, 2008
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    quite a journey and loving trip. success in the contest.


  • sapphireangelwings
    January 7, 2008
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    This was utterly amazing! The way you use words to guide your readers through such intimacy with so much grace and beauty............WOW! I literally did not want this to end and yet....I was eager to be fulfilled! The background fits as well! Loved it!


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    January 7, 2008

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    Passion flows from your poem in such a magical way. I liked how the imagery just guided the reader through such a passionate poem, with style and such class. Thank you so much for sending me the link to your beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest.


  • LionessK Greeters member
    January 7, 2008

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    oh... wow
    very nice*


  • Sweet Susan
    January 7, 2008
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    Good!

    I like it! Not too revealing and not too cute.


  • Heavenly Angel
    January 7, 2008

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    Smoldering hot and sultry! Just the way intimacy should be
    A very FINE sharing this is!
    Thank you for being part of the contest! This is so very well done!

  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 7, 2008
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    oh and this


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    January 7, 2008

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    my my my i see what i have missed and it is still good, i like this, i missed you poems like this that leave me needing a very cold shower, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
  • Bob Fox
    January 7, 2008
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    Combustion

    The heat baby oh the heat. I need a cold shower now


  • Cannonsfire gold member
    January 6, 2008

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    Ok where's the hose??? Phew it's been hot here in Australia but no where near as hot as this page! Love, C

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