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His Forever

Standing

at a well of wishes,

my heart searches

for pureness,

structured in

poetic beauties design.

 

Waiting in life

for my love to intervene,

standing in awe

of masterful creations.

 

Mighty hands,

lead my footsteps

into adventures

of today’s endeavor.

 

Beside me,

with every breath I take,

guiding emotions

with words blessings.

 

Crossing

paths of turmoil,

knowing truly in my heart.

His love beholds my image

within favored grace,

from his throne.

 

Moving

in the knowledge,

nothing can harm me.

 

For I am in the Potters Hands

to stay forever

 

                        through eternity...

 

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  • Sandygram silver member
    January 17, 2008
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    I forgot I wanted to leave some applauses


  • Sandygram silver member
    January 17, 2008

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    Congratulations!!! Your have penned such a beautiful poem and it is very deserving of a trophy.So uplifting and heartfelt. A pleasure to read this afternoon. Bless you. Take care, Sandy


  • crushed
    January 17, 2008

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    Lovely.

    I really enjoyed this poem. The rhythm was great and of course the content was brilliant. Though you did go over 20 lines which I was hoping wouldn't happen but oh well. Thanks for entering my contest!

    -crushed


  • Mistermuggs
    January 7, 2008
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    Very nice poem.


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    January 7, 2008

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    a beautiful write with sweet tender words and emotions penned into it. well done and best of luck in the contest hun

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