Your aim through the crosshairs
So perfect, I was helpless
To your precision pinpoint stare.
Hearing the ticking chimes
Of clockwork brains behind silver eyes,
Such a beautiful machine,
I was completely and utterly yours
In a fluttering animal heartbeat.
Author notes
40 words or less was hard hehe
A contest entry
- prompt 16 entries 40 words or less by Grey Mouser.
450 points, ended January 8, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Critical comments please
Comments
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Well I am glad it was so hard for you to do this, because you have delivered a wonderul write. With great timing and flow, the masterpiece of flesh confirmed in the perfection of form. Many thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blessed,
Mouser -
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Hey thanks so much for the gold!
Rosie x
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