Hammer the steel
Burn the flesh
Take the fire
and be engulfed by flame
see the blade
close youre eyes
wish for death
and be ridden of youre soul
Know youre fate
count the seconds passing
hate the light
return to battle
Come to kill
to rip
to rend
to tear
see the tears
end their torment
it is all for justice
break them
Stain youre hands
the colour red
paint youre face with their blood
and know their retribution
It is youre call
for you alone
rip them
rend them
burn them
tear them
mame them
kill them
Author notes
violence
listening to Rammstein whilst i wrote this so....
just comment! :P
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i like it
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Lol, i think i dream to much, im really not as old as i have said in my profile, im actuallly only 14 as of two months ago.
But so far my life is amazing, but the restrictions of being a youth keep me from doing many of the things i want to, like getting a car and a job
I dont have that much money so i dream of better things.
this was also written in an angry period of time for me -
You have a lot of anger inside you ...
why?
Anger destroys the soul. Use your rhymes to be freed.
Myra -
What is this poem about exactly?
I like it,I just am not sure what its really about.lol
Good job though and I like your style so far.
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Thanks ^^ I was thinking about the crusades when i wrote this, but it touches on anger and death, the background has nothing to do with the poem and in fact i am going to change it now
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