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[ an unsteady stich in time, ]

an unsteady stich in time,
with lazer blinking lights and fireflies
glittering at the sunset, a little small spark
flittering off at a rare occasion,
I kind of feel stupid, with every spin
of every dropped dime,
I can't get you out of my mind,
  I'll never walk away
  Like I did today
but you can leave
  a million times over,
just know
wherever you leave to
i'm leaving with you

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  • The Hermit
    March 10, 2008
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    The title reminds me of a space novel but I love the romantic twist at the end.


  • Alien She
    January 7, 2008
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    i think it's cute


  • hopelessly-broken
    January 7, 2008

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    aww... i think it, its short and keeps the reader wanting more..

    keep it up
    peace out
    love HB
    xcoxox