If your heart is broken, cracking like old tile
fix it now, go ahead and smile
if people hate you cause your outta style
oh who really cares, go ahead and smile
if your dad goes away and you won't see him for a while
time will go quicker, if you just smile
if your mother wants you to run for a mile
why not,come on and and smile
A contest entry
- For the kids 13 and younger: Anything to cheer me! by Sky Prince Ireland.
300 points, ended January 20, 2008, 31 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Will you smile?
Comments
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Very nice. Those are words many with dark spirit would be inspired by. Thanks for entering my contest.
Good luck.
Brian -
That's the spirit! Too much gloom and doom these days, head up, smile and go on with your life! I like the fast paced rhythm and rhyme like the beat to a song. Well done!
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HAHA! thnx
Glad you understand!
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