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Chipped Tooth Crusade

Missing image

What hellish place, I know, dear heart;
that broken place of Goodbye
a tooth-ground smile
waving from a jet window

getting lost, immediately
in jet stream I can not attach myself to

be drug to death on hard bumps into clouds
of reality
that gone is gone

left to gouge sod at being earthbound
I dug my way to hell

pain like nerve in a broken tooth

I drug air across it just to feel

and it never came close
to rawness of my half-empty soul


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"Life will never be the same again"

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  • Zerstort
    January 9, 2008

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    Nice work...this has a lot to it. The picture adds to it.

    Thanks for entering

    Aden Recreated