Bam!
There's my brain
You see it over there;
By that big blood stain?
This wasn't random
Far from tame
My crazy ass
Wanted that train
If it wasn't one thing
It was another
Head pounding, she talks to much
Hm..so why not smother?
Like a bomb
Ready to blow
My mind is racing
I got-to-GO!
Clack clack as the gun went off
Yep it's me, with the 47
Mass murder suicide..
And all by eleven
A contest entry
- Kill Me by LullabyxxDreamer.
600 points, ended July 4, 2008, 28 entries
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wooooooooooow
amazing write very great job
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well as everyone has told you this poem was great you did a wonderful job with it hope all is well in that contest? loved this a lot your great!
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Wow, I want to laugh and stand in aww of your artistic abilities all at the same time. I really love this poem! Super amazing. I can't really describe it... but this was wonderful and is deffinetly a finalist!
Great work and best of luck in the contest! -
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Aha, thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed my piece ^-^
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Ohmywow. I loved this poem. It hit home. You made me think. You have no idea how you just wrote the words I was thinking. lol. Like...idk. but I related to it. Good job.
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I FUCKING LOVED THIS POEM WITH MY HEART!!!!!
alright this is my fave poem i loved it it had me going crazy lol i read it like so many times great work ed love gina
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