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Simply love

Just looking at you
Brings a smile to my face
Just thinking about you
Warms my heart to a different pace

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Written November 8th, 2003

A contest entry

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  • MoonStarRaven silver member
    June 2

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    how sweet and lovely although short it is very beautiful and I enjoyed reading it! good luck in the contest you entered.


  • Samplette gold member
    June 2

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    Just a few words...but they are both strong ang graceful. So true to life and love. Best to you in the contest.
    Sam


  • PurpleSky
    June 2

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    very short, sweet and simple and well said in few words. Thank you so much for taking the time to enter my contest and best wishes to you!
    huggles
    Lena