Asteroid showers
of flaming passion-
Venus' seduction left
Mercury mesmerized
Author notes
Prompt: Jetstream blues
In a list
A contest entry
- I Owe, I Owe A Quickie- Here We Go - 10x10x10 PIF by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended January 6, 2008, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Amazing write. Ten words with a universe of meaning! Congratulations on your Gold.
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Ooh, universal language you used here
in a metaphorical way off course 
very short but poignant hun
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Outstanding! The image this conjured in my head is just as cosmic as your words. As thought limbs of the universe where grasping reality and showing us all the promise of unity. This one really got to me.
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How Orgasmic
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when i read this i can feel like im there.. in that image.. with so many emotions..
i love this truly♥
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Hmmmmm...boy can ya feel the passion in this one, Girl!! Outstanding! I LOVE it! Other than that, I'm speechless. Just WOW!! Congrats on a very well deserved Gold!
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Beautifully done
Awesome writing, Bel
Congrats on the gold -
Wow! Well done with this one
and congratulations to you on
your Gold! Keep up the wonderful
work here and thanks a lot for
sharing it!
Jeremy0826 -
Wow! Thank you for entering and good luck. Storm
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ohhhhhhhhh a hottie! Excellent take on the prompt best to you in the contest ~blessings always~ Trisha
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wow I loved it! best of luck in contest
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Prompt: Jetstream blues Will judge at quarter till the hour.
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