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Tracing Floorboards

There was a time,
when I knew the floor
more than  faces of friends
.. but that is no more,

Look me in the eyes,
I won't look away,
You've no power over me,
No longer do you hold sway,
Look me in the eyes,
and you'll see something there,
that had once been run out,
It's a confident glare.

Confidence, for a long time,
was hidden away,
tucked in a corner of my heart,
she was afraid to say,
"Look me in the eyes,
I won't look away."

No longer will I greet
the dirt on your shoes,
Go on and try me,
I've nothing to lose.

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  • Z1-N-OnlyEvilMonkey
    February 7, 2008
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    this one is great. i love your poetry and how you express your self.


  • samantha jean
    January 6, 2008

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    Wow. This is amazing. I really love your rhyming in this. Also, your piece is very inspirational.
    Great job. =]