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Abandonment

Missing image
No stranger feeling have I had.
Left behind, left so sad.

Abandonment threatens, wherever I go.
Feelings I hide; no one can know,
Just how deep these feelings flow.

Leave me today or maybe the next?
When will it be? Does anyone know?
Time for me to go first?
Couldn’t leave me then.

Nothing left to leave.
Nothing left to hurt.

Author notes

This is one of my earliest poems I have written.

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  • HereComesTheSun
    April 12

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    i loved how you use questions in your write. it really brings them down to earth

    thanks for entering