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Dependence

Missing image
If I should fall, will you pick me up?
If I should cry, will you dry my tears?
How will I know when this world gets too much,
That you will be here with your loving touch?

My face, it wears a thousand masks.
Which should I wear for you today?
Should I pretend and laugh and play?
Maybe I’ll show you the me that is real,
The inside that knows just how to feel.

The risks have been many taken with you.
How will I know you’ll be here for me,
When it’s you that I need, and it’s you I can’t see?

Author notes

This is one of my very early poems.

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  • Positive: i love how you used questions so well in this piece and how it showed how much you wanted this person to catch you really pulling emotion out of the reader.

    Negative: i didnt feel it had much depth to the emotion it really didnt show it from the heart.

    thanks for entering