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A friend

                                             

A friend is a person to whom you can impart,
all the joys and sorrows that dwell within your heart.
One in whom your secrets you can trustingly confide,
who knows all your faults and failings,
Yet is always slow to chide.
and when you err and fall from grace,
As many of us do a true friend stands.right
by your side to help you struggle through.

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JUDMC Option 2 and she will be loved

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  • great insight


  • just4fun20
    April 7
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    great peice and very touching you show that you knoww what i true friend should do

    • judmc
      April 7
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      just4fun20

      Many Thanks for your kind comments on "A Friend" so glad you liked it
      Best Wishes....George....


  • Cyanide Dreams
    January 25

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    Very nice and very sweet. Good job and this shows how you can get over anything with great friends at your side. good job. Thanks for entering this into my contest, it made me feel very hopeful.


  • Beret55 silver member
    November 24, 2008
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    Very true and very good poem.


  • xXGoddessofPainXx
    November 23, 2008

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    Great piece you have here.. Short and sweet.. Your friend's must be very happy and proud of you.. Love your friends

    • judmc
      November 24, 2008
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      Pixiequeen92

      Many Thanks for your kind comments on "A Friend" so glad you liked it Best Wishes George !!


  • trekkergirl
    November 22, 2008

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    This is a sweet poem about friendships. I really do like it. You wrote it well. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • DarknessOfSanity
    September 23, 2008
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    wonderful!

    awww! this was so sweet! i loved it so much! it's definitely well written and has a super duper nice flow to it. it wasn't forced or anything at all, and the words were just breathtaking the way you put them all together. i love it! thanks for entering and good luck!


  • Riftkin gold member
    May 27, 2008

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    yep that sounds like a true friend to me
    one that is there through thick and thin
    let hope that one can truly see
    that a friend is happy .... lose or win

    Riftkin


  • i-love-my-bra
    May 14, 2008
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    good luck thats really sweet, it really shows what friends are to you

  • hmmmmmmm
    April 30, 2008

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    Lovely!!

    A really lovely poem, I like the rhyme a lot! good message, thank you for entering. Good luck and I'll keep you posted!

    • judmc
      May 1, 2008
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      flashofgold

      Many Thanks for your kind comments on"A Friend"
      Very much appreciated. Best Wishes George

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