I'm a captive of my minds imagination,
suspended in the realms
of a surreal odyssey.
My Thoughts penetrate time in this
dimension of artful dexterity.
As I stand in the palms of eternity
awaiting transformation.
The spheres of life emerge from
a sea of ephiphanies.
Ever pressing me forward to
an immanent domain of posterity.
Surrounded by the waters of life
where I'm overflowing in
everlasting wonder.
Anticipating the new birth of
metamorphic perfection.
In the citidel of universal
light and luminous tranquility.
To wit the brilliance of a
new creation of complete ecstasy.
Author notes
The inspiration for this poem
can be found in the link below.
http://allpoetry.com/contest/2384790#
A contest entry
- Pic Inspired- By Soulful Woman by Soulful Woman.
1000 points, ended January 20, 2008, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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awesome
This is magic darell, I can see that it fully deserved the gold , truly magic write.. you captured the essence within the photo beautifully....
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By far the best of your work I've read so far. Excellent use of language and control of tone. As someone who is far from religious, I still enjoy reading your work, which speaks for the universality of it. Very nice job.
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personaly, I love this piece. It takes you on a journey of soul. Excellently penned.
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Sounds like a metamorphoses of the soul. Very good write with a strong close. I enjoyed the poem. Happy trails
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Excellent writing. Much depth and creativity. Thank you for your entry and good luck in the contest.
Soulful Woman -
Wonderfully created by you my sweet
loved the flow of this piece, good luck in the contest,
ephiphany☻
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