I've drowned in my tears
That fell to the ground
The gun firing in the distance
Is the only sound
My cries turned to echoes
As they faded from words
"Tell me the truth!"
I can't take this anymore.
You lied too me far too much.
Now there's harly anyone I can truly trust.
You've broken my heart
Like a fragile piece of glass
You promised me our love would always and forever last
I've cried again and wanted to die
You'r no longer in my thoughts every second that passes by
...I pulled the trigger...
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this is awesome...just amazingly great love the way its written...
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I like your poem, but the text is *extremely* hard to read with the backround. If you truned it to any light color it would be easier to read.
The poem itself is very sad and full of heartbreak and lost hope and I like it a lot because of the expression. -
this is so heartbreaking..
great write though.
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