how can you twist her and pull her apart
sit there smile think your smart?
you've broken it once, will break again
you call for us my false friend
you know hard it is to see
past your wrongs just to me
You have one then the other its true
but sooner or later it'll be just you
i cant believe i know your name
im sick to say it causes pain
you bring to others nothing but shame
as you try to keep up this love less game
hurt one then the other how will it end
With the right one or will the wrong one send?
A contest entry
- Holiday Contest of Love & Hate by Ms Raneika.
1200 points, ended January 7, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very very good! awesome message.
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very dark and good piece ...thanks for entering my contest much love, Raneika
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You tell him, he deserves it. This is a good bit of anger and you said it clearly and concisely. One thing 'you're' not 'your'.
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