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Smothered

Sprawled on the floor
fading
fading

Black veils everything
Wrapped in suffocation
muffling fragility

My breath is gone
you are on my chest
pressing the pillow
against my face

I can't see
I can't hear
I can't scream.

Try to catch my life
as it runs through my fingers
but

Its gone.

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Oh noes.

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  • my1lovewearsdiapers
    January 13, 2008

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    this is very good and involves and issue that is faced every day one of murder thank you for entering and I really enjoyed reading your entry good luck