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Smooth Food

Rich,smooth peanut butter makes my mouth water
A tasty treat,thats gooey and it melts in my mouth

It's good on celery.It's amazing on jelly
It's softness takes me on a dream about...
its creamy goodnes which is as smooth as an apple.

As i first open the can it's sweet scent comes out
Which smells as good as roses blooming in the middle of the spring

I will always love eating peanut butter
For i like it very much

Author notes

yum. im 10 years old.

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  • Number-1-Popcorn-Fan
    December 8, 2008
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    WOW! that was AWSOME!!!!!! Congratulations on the honorable mention!!!


  • Number-1-Popcorn-Fan
    August 6, 2008
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    Very good poem!


  • O.o
    March 18, 2008
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    hahahahalol L love peanut butter too!


  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    March 3, 2008

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    Yummy, girl! cute peanut butter poem!



    You rock!


  • PinkPony
    January 6, 2008
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    I think you are telling the truth about peanut butter!

    I LOVE peanut butter! I am so glad you love it, too. Your poem has wonderful thoughts about this favorite food. YUM YUM YUM!!! A poem that totally gets my attention and I send you a hug! Oh, and here is a cookie with peanut butter on it:

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