A new year has come.We are all glad to see it.
Our feelings our so happy grandma started screami'n
Suddenly grandma started looking sick
Maybe she gave dad's fruit cake a small lick
Or that she drunk to much canned pop
She got a phone and called the cops.
They came there with a donut in there hand
Grandma was woozy and she through a can
The police realized they should quickly leave
They said"Granny,just get back to your weaves"
She drunk more heavy soda and burped MORE gas
She said"Want some" I said,"I'm gonna pass"
Granny felt sick later.She was about to hurl
We got very worried.Even small,boys and girls
She sadly passed out.My aunt started crying
"Well" I said."it is better than her dieng."
We tried to get her up cause we were all frightened
Granny learn your lesson,i had enlightened.
She finnaly woke up.We were all releived
Maybey next time,smartness she'll receive.
Author notes
Enjoy the adventures of CCCRRRAAAAAZZZZYYY Granny.
A contest entry
- WHAT'S NEW ?????? for Kids 12 and Under by ten thousand cicadas.
450 points, ended January 18, 2008, 6 entries
Silver trophy winner
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300 points, ended January 20, 2008, 31 entries
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that was cute.. i actally loled.. it was more of an lqtm (laughing quietly to myself) but u get it.. lol this is cute..!!! good luck in the contest. please send me a message.. IM A youngster too =)
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Crrrrazy indeed. Thanks for entering.
Good luck.
Brian -
that was awsome i loved it it was so coo
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i agree nichtmich
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What an adorable, funny story. Poor granny, you're telling all her secret stories--how embarrassing!
You did a great job with your rhyme and rhythm. There are a few grammar errors and stuff like that, but overall this is a great poem! Thanks so much for entering!
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Vivid story of a wild granny! I'm a granny to, but I don't do anything tooooo weird
Funny and exciting, who says you get wiser as you get older? This should cheer anybody up!
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Good poem except the word to use is 'drank', not drunk.
Other than that, fine job. She does sound like a crazy granny; somewhat like the granny on THE BEVERLY HILLBILLIES. Anyway thanks for entering. Good luck.
Brian -
well, you rhymed well, but i do not think uu r supposed to use "" in poems. but other wise, good job
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