Chipping away at my heart
are words of hurt and pain.
Chiseled out from anguish
that I've relived once again.
Each peck of the verbal hammer
chipping away at my heart;
your hopes that is has destroyed,
to watch me fall apart.
But let me tell you something,
I have vowed to not be blue.
Chipping away at my heart,
no more memories of you.
And so I've opened up my wings
as a new life I will start;
your hurtful ways can't be found
chipping away at my heart.
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#2. Chipping away at my heart
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A contest entry
- Thoughts To Write About by JeannieD Hunter.
900 points, ended January 10, 20 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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HOOD-WINKED!
You've really caught the essence of what was asked for, this poem is ethereal and has lead my senses in a most possitive way, because I can relate...you have penned with a deep emotion which grabs the reader and I like the title and third stanza, because it shows stubborness...I'm so glad I came to read this wonderful engaging poem...congratulations on the gold, well deserved
You have been ambushed by a Poetic Bandit
Love and smiles
~Lilac
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Powerful!!
Love this one Storm and what a Piece You have penned!!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!
-throws confetti-
Wooooooooo Hooooooooo
These lines grabbed and tugged at the Heartstrings
But let me tell you something,
I have vowed to not be blue.
Chipping away at my heart,
no more memories of you.
Thank You for sharing Your Heart also Spirit~
Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet Soul
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Thank you hun, appreciate your comments.
Storm
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WOW! This is very impressive! Now if I can get to the place you are! Awesome job on the prompt, and I really like the background. Thank you for entering and good luck!
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I was just browing through poems and the title of yours caught my eye. It has great flow and a lovely message that you can overcome a heartbreak. Great job :o)
Charity
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More times than I care to count, I've been in that dark place where words and actions cut through to the very core of my heart and soul....
Your words touched a very tender place deep inside me for I'm just learning how to move up and beyond the realms of the dark places
A very fine sharing in this contest; I wish you the very best! -
this is ana amazing take on the prompt and it holds deep emotion and imagery within it. a powerful take on the prompt well done
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